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Patrick | Megapot
@pl
Which is a better intro to Megapot in a job description? New vs. old below
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Patrick | Megapot
@pl
Latest update to #1 is here: Also, this goes at the top of the job posting, with other details below, see here: https://jobs.gem.com/megapot/
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I prefer 1 - more to the point
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I like what the new one is trying to do, but the hook is too passive. A hook should never begin with a prepositional phrase. Maybe you could try it a different way, like for example, story-telling tone, or a thought-provoking question. “The year is 2030 and you stop everything you’re doing once a day just to check out Megapot and see… who became an instant billionaire today?” Or “What if every day, someone in the world became an instant billionaire? At Megapot, we’re trying to make that a reality.” Just off the dome, but recommend something more like this. Also, congrats on the stealth raise! Was going to ask you about angel but I guess I missed the boat 😂
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@tldr
#1 for sure, but I would take the first sentence and put it in front of paragraph two. That’s a killer opener (“huge vision and btw we’re already leading”) Then place paragraph two near the end as it’s more aspirational — they can choose to feel that way if they actually read it all
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@christopher
First for employees, second for investors.
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@gramajo.eth
The intro on #2 is strong
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@loringharkness
Number 2 … I love the strong hook at the beginning.
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@tanishq
I love 2. It sets a very strong visualization up-front!
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@francescop
Very much #1
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@mulf.eth
just sent over an application for the full stack role, think i'd be an excellent fit!
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