Sam (crazy candle person) ✦
@samantha
do you guys get this ad or nah?
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Grey
@greygood
Nah
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Sam (crazy candle person) ✦
@samantha
What can I do to improve it?
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Grey
@greygood
"Why settle for one scent?" is hollow messaging. No urgency, no hook, no differentiator. Sell the experience Try: TWO SCENTS. _______________________ TWO SCENTS. ZERO COMPROMISE. TWO SCENTS. ONE PERFECT MOMENT. Etc.
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Sam (crazy candle person) ✦
@samantha
helpful! thank you grey! im going to work on that headline.
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Grey
@greygood
Consider centering the candle for better impact. Also, consider omitting scent names.. could spark curiosity
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