🕯️They/them. Scaled cos from 0-$300k in arr, 7-35 employees, 0-100k users. Now I’m making joyful candles at humankindcandles.com

i get it and i love it BUT it isn’t as clear that it’s a candle because foody flavour names + flames not immediately discernible, especially with the no traditional wicks! 
it might make more sense at first glance if the fire was more, fire-y?

I got roasted by y'all (I'm so grateful I did) so here is the improved ad. I definitely worked on it more than I should've (maybe 4.5 hours of work) but if ads are going to be my GTM strategy, upfront investment must be made

Thanks for the feedback, I added smoke to make it more explicit:

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Ah yes! I wanted to make the smoke a bit longer but I didn’t want to pay $19 for canva premium.. if the ad doesn’t work I’ll pay the $19 and make it longer

so glad i could help!! 

the smoke makes it a lot clearer that it’s a candle, + the explicit caption up top >o< 

depending on where you’re posting, the smoke rising loop might want to be a bit longer so if people linger to read (and then hopefully click!) it isn’t replaying many many times!!

Thanks for the feedback, I added smoke to make it more explicit: https://farcaster.xyz/samantha/0xcbeb1a3d