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if you're a video creator, i'd love any feedback on my editing / format etc here. trying to dial in a ~3-5 minute builder chat format that is relatively easy to execute and edit.

particularly open to "tricks" that could drive engagement (e.g. a better opener).

cc @jackwyldes.eth @afrochicks (who also got shoutouts :)

hi im naomi i’m an athlete and creator!

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 - portrait.so/naomi

Definitely need a better hook bro, it doesn’t necessarily needs to be related, it just needs to grab attention.

Cuts are definitely frequent and good, that helps keeping up with the tempo and make the video seems faster.

Since the video is 4 minutes long (which is kind of a lot for nowadays attention span) I would also maybe recommend a “(tap about something) but I’ll show you at the end of the video” so maybe people will stay and listen (or just skip to the end if they need that piece of info)

My 2 cents, with love🖤

Just /keepushing • believer of /butterflyeffect         3D artist • Year 5 of everydays                 https://linktr.ee/Push.gfx

I know this won’t be your go to style, but it’s surely enough to empathize the power of a good hook.

It’s 90% of the whole thing nowadays

Now I want to see Jesse use this exact hook 😂

I know this won’t be your go to style, but it’s surely enough to empathize the power of a good hook.

It’s 90% of the whole thing nowadays 

https://vm.tiktok.com/ZNdBBFqag/