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ok step 1 - save the dates would love feedback - handwriting will be scanned in much higher quality. not sure what we'll do for paper but want to print at home
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first of all v cute! and congrats! Quick feedback: 1. Love the general direction. no notes! 2. Front and Back look like 2 different designs. need some elements to tie them together. Easiest move would be to swap red for same green 3. I’d pick a more interesting sans serif. Your design says cute, but your font choice gives corporate 4. For printing, get thicker card stock. your home printer can handle thicker paper than you think. It’ll make it feel way better
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5. the thick rectangular border is not really needed. it's stodgy and takes away from the cute drawings. if you want a border, suggest making it wiggly or something to match the rest of the vibe
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great feedback all around, thank you! people seemed to say something similar on the last part, and i agree with the colors + font!
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again it's overall very cute! i love where it's going
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