ok step 1 - save the dates

would love feedback - handwriting will be scanned in much higher quality. not sure what we'll do for paper but want to print at home

congrats on your wedding! 

some suggestions:

pick a font for the upper section (maybe for your names only) that is a close match to the handwriting below. i would then look for a font that goes with it for the save the date part in the upper section. 

the little graphics in each corner could be much smaller. 

pick any 3 colors (max) for the card unless going colorful is what you specifically want. o

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oooh good idea on the font! i actually had a version where "save the date" was handwritten, but it felt chaotic. i'll try that out though

good call on the graphics, i agree. (fiancee liked them big, i'll see if i can convince her haha)

and colorful is what we're going for! the wedding will be very bright colors so i think we want that showcased here, even if its a bit overwhelming

thank you for the feedback!

sorry if i got too excited and overstepped, i really like working on design haha. i used to make these for friends and family all the time.

i love the colorful approach! i’d reccomend adding another color on the front side in that case (even if it’s black to connect with the handwritten text on the back)