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if you're a video creator, i'd love any feedback on my editing / format etc here. trying to dial in a ~3-5 minute builder chat format that is relatively easy to execute and edit.

particularly open to "tricks" that could drive engagement (e.g. a better opener).

cc @jackwyldes.eth @afrochicks (who also got shoutouts :)

hi im naomi i’m an athlete and creator!

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 - portrait.so/naomi

Yeah I think an intro “hook” that could help the pace

And I’m a fan of the emphasis camera zoom or reframe  

Doesn’t have to be a ton but it helps keep viewer engaged 

Convo was great

when you say "intro hook", what is that? like a voiceover from me?

no, that makes total sense. i gotta figure out how to actually do that now :|

You used “if your based, you’ll ship” as the intro hook 

But then it jumps into the beginning of the conversation with no camera change or separation so it feels less impactful 

You could punch in in his face for the intro line 

cut to music with a title or an intro by you

Something with movement - you  “we are out here talking to the based builders….” 

Back to the interview with a low music bed like you had 


Sorry if this doesn’t make sense I’m not great at explaining things via text