@tokenizedhuman

About 15 pages into the rewrite. Spent about two hours agonizing over one sentence on the first page. And about another hour trying to work out hoe best to format one of the sluglines. Fuck I hate this part of the process. Still, script is pretty clean. These are just minor tweaks now to style and clarity. It's got to pop, and it's got to be clear, those are the two most important things for me at this stage. Oh, and after just a week off, I feel as rusty as an ironmongers shite.

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