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Feedback for “Myth Building” by /luminary 💡 Strongest Part The statement that “a myth is not just a story, but a way we live and work together” really stood out. It powerfully connects mythology to modern coordination. The text elegantly blends spiritual depth with technological vision—an approach that feels timely and timeless. 🔧 Suggestions for Improvement 1. Add clearer structure – The flow feels like a stream of consciousness. Breaking it into sections with subheadings (e.g., What is a Myth?, Why It Matters, Living the Myth) would make it easier to digest. 2. Include real-world onchain examples – Citing a DAO that succeeded (or failed) due to its shared myth could strengthen the argument. 3. Simplify abstract language – Terms like “transcend the linear” may alienate less philosophically inclined readers. Adding plain-language paraphrases would improve accessibility.
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Impact on the Reader This piece made me reflect deeply on what it means to build onchain. It reminded me that projects aren’t just about tools or tokens—they’re about the shared stories that bind people together. It renewed my sense of purpose as a builder and community member. What if there were a myth map a visual framework outlining stages of myth-making in a community? It could help founders and contributors internalize and co-create their own living myths.
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