Requesting negative feedback on this notification phrasing. I wanna get better at sending good ones!

Is this too attention-grabbing? Should I have phrased it more informative so that it's easier to make a choice of whether to click on it?

Few more examples of what could have been sent

1.)
title: Long read: "Still here"
body: New article by redphonecrypto

2.)
title: Still here
body: Redphonecrypto asks why we are still here and what is crypto's renewed purpose?

i ignored it because it was a bit too vague and it clearly looked clickbaity but kinda not the good type

also i'd open no2 and skip no1