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if you're a video creator, i'd love any feedback on my editing / format etc here. trying to dial in a ~3-5 minute builder chat format that is relatively easy to execute and edit.

particularly open to "tricks" that could drive engagement (e.g. a better opener).

cc @jackwyldes.eth @afrochicks (who also got shoutouts :)

hi im naomi i’m an athlete and creator!

join /actrackclub for fitness and /gmatcha for vibes

 - portrait.so/naomi

From my experience, videos should be 10–30 seconds long and always include intrigue, metaphors, and an unexpected ending — without that, most videos will feel boring to 99% of a general audience. I’d keep it like this to spark more questions in the comments.

So, this video already has a metaphor, but it’s too long, and the script needed something like an intriguing hook at the start — for example, “Naomi made X dollars in six months just by posting content, like on other social platforms.” And then an unexpected ending, like a clip from the FarCon trip where everyone hung out together offline. @jessepollak