@shinzwrld999
I like how it moved from wonderland to scary kept me engaged, I could feel your voice [tone and intensity] in my head because the few times I have written ideas like this are what I love to write about but it also carries messages inside
This write gave me a flashback and I think this could also be a build-up for a nice Telltale mini-app, lol could do a voice over
What do you think?