@savvyjr
The document effectively outlines the guiding principles of Luminary, emphasizing collaborative myth-building and narrative expansion. However, the near-term goals could be more specific. For example, "better ways to onboard people into the world" could include concrete steps like creating a wiki or hosting orientation sessions.
The link to the prototype app is a strong addition, but a brief demo video or screenshots could help those who are less technically inclined understand its functionality.
The proposed mini-app features (Daily Collaborative Story, Echo Map, Canon) are innovative and engaging. However, the document could benefit from a clearer explanation of how these tools will integrate with the community and incentivize participation, especially for newcomers.