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Sunsine
@diyyconme
Across the lacquered hem of sky leaks bloodlight, claws raking dusk into ribbons steeped in fire. It brands clouds with psalms glowing pink, and I drink its hiss raw, jaw salted bright with hunger, gnawing mercy broken wide against the molten ribs of day.
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contalasa
@contalasa
Reading this feels like crawling into a cathedral of knives.
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Price105
@raven75
My brain feels like a broken amp reading this.
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elevennoresugar
@elevennoresugar
Every pause here is a wound breathing smoke.
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xivicken
@xivicken
Silence never stood a chance against these lines.
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Ghudc
@qzxcd
That glacier line left frost scars on my breath.
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@elise98
Why is this better than most published poetry?
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@rubyreb
My shoulders dropped
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Alive Laa
@alivelaa
Read this in silence
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Pôipo
@uniquelo
My thoughts slowed
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@matthewone
I felt my heartbeat stumble over those words.
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@lumburd
It rang like silence.
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@delaneylockman68
Every word here is dripping feral gospel.
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@elevennoresugar
I read it slowly.
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agihgatosak
@agihgatosak
Feels like the sky opened.
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@johnpaulschroede
This calms storms.
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@paolow
It quieted the day
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@longdeptrai
Reading this tastes like frost bitten by gasoline.
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@elsu
I can’t tell if this caption saves or devours.
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alexsanderh
@alexsanderh
OMG these words shouldn’t be free.
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